The Liminal Path Excerpt

This is a chapter from my science fiction novel in progress, tentatively titled The Liminal Path. I don't know yet when the book will be published. Unlike non-fiction books where you can get an agent and publisher based on a proposal, novels (at least novels from novelists who haven't published yet) have to be completely written before you can start the search for an agent and publisher.

I'm within spitting distance of completing the first book of what will probably be a trilogy. And to celebrate that fact and to get more people interested in The Liminal Path and thus giving it energy, I'm posting an excerpt here.

Please email questions and positive comments to me at Rosanne@RosanneBane. For now, I'm not entertaining criticism, except from agents who represent science fiction novels and are invited to say anything they think will help.

Chapter 1

            The mule scented the intruder before the woman or the dog, though in fairness to Ry, Peregrine had sent him to patrol the downwind slope. The mule stood with his black velvet nose into the wind and bless him, he didn’t make a noise, just waggled his ears and stamped his forefoot.
            Peregrine scanned the upslope and frowned with concentration, trying to figure out what the mule was looking at from where she stood twenty feet away. She didn’t see anything. Nothing moving. No splash of color out of place. If it was langers, the mule would have brayed in alarm. But she didn’t doubt him. Baily was solid. If it had been Burly Boy, who was grazing in the paddock on that particular day, she might have had second thoughts. But this was solid, trustworthy Baily, so she extracted herself from the thorny bushes. When she reached the mule, she patted his shoulder and offered him cubed sugar from her jacket pocket. Baily munched the extravagant three cubes with relish, but he kept his head pointed up the hill, flicking his ears at the unseen enemy.
            Peregrine carefully poured the soft, reddish-purple berries from the bucket into the pack baskets Baily wore. The biting sweet scent filled her nostrils. She breathed deeply, then shook off the desire to get lost in the smell. Some people wore gloves and masks to pick Essence berries, but not Peregrine. She’d never make the claim aloud, but she knew the Essence that flowed from her still pots was superior because she let her own essence mingle with the berries from the very beginning. It meant her hands got scratched, but to her way of thinking, that was just the beginning of the sacrifices a distiller had to be willing to make.
            Ry had noticed her movements and returned silently to her side. She pointed her arm to direct the big dog, whispering, “Perimeter. Hold.”
            It wasn’t langers, so it had to be human. If it was a neighbor, they would have whistled a signal and hoped she wasn’t there to hear them trespassing on her berry patch. So chances were, it was Dracos over the hill. She could take the mule and dog and leave, hoping they wouldn’t find her. But if they happened over the hill, even Dracos couldn’t miss the broken brambles, the berries in one section missing, the tracks of human, mule and dog crisscrossing the soft ground.
            Dracos pushed for more information about Essence all the time. Did chemical analysis. Dropped in unexpectedly to inspect distilleries throughout the fall and winter. Questioned people. Hell, they’d set up their own distillery in several Population Centers and forced Pathians to work there. They made whisky, but they’d never make Essence. Even if they did discover Essence berries, they couldn’t make Essence.
            Kara Foxworth, the eternal cynic, opined that the Dracos already knew about Essence berries and it was pointless to go through the effort of keeping that a secret any longer. Fortunately, Kara wasn’t in charge of the Foxworth family yet. In Peregrine’s opinion, letting Dracos know berries were a key ingredient would give them one more piece of the puzzle. And one more piece of leverage against every distiller on Path because they’d control access to the berries. As it was, no one was allowed to keep a distillery intact without a Draco license. So she had to take Ry and go over the hill to do what she could to keep the Dracos from discovering this berry patch and getting curious about what she, a known distiller, had been doing there when she should be home sprouting the malt.
            She picked up the picket rope and led the mule away from the hill Ry had been sent to defend. There was a cave entrance nearby. They had to travel through the thorns that thrived where Essence berries grew, but Baily, sweet cooperative Baily, didn’t protest, though he did balk if she didn’t push the thorns far enough aside. Peregrine slipped on gloves for this duty. Once past the thorns, they moved more easily through lush rhododendrons to a cave no one would have seen if they didn’t know where to look.
            When they reached the cave, Baily waited just inside while Peregrine quickly unfastened the panniers and set them behind a rockfall. A serious inspection would find them, but a casual glance would miss them. She turned the mule into the small corral and he contentedly thrust his head in the water bucket. He wore only a halter without a bit, so he could eat and drink without interference. He didn’t mind wearing the light harness the baskets attached to, nor did he object to being left alone in the dark, damp cave. Burly Boy would have been braying his fool head off by now and Peregrine blessed the fates that made this Baily’s shift.
            She pulled the camouflaged, soundproof door into place behind her. With a twist of the hidden wheel at the base of the door, she locked it. There was always a twinge when she did that. If something happened to delay her, there was no one else on the holding to come find the mule and bring him home. She had nightmares about Baily and Burly starving to death in the dark because she forgot they were there, because she couldn’t remember the combination, because the Dracos held her captive.
            But she didn’t have time for sentiment. She shouldered the rifle she’d kept hidden in the cave and moved quickly to hide any traces of her and the mule’s passage. Fortunately the resilient rhododendron had sprung back into place. Crouching, because the intruder could top the hill at any moment, she ran up the slope as fast as she could. It occurred to her, as her hip began to protest, that if this was one of the Foxworth clan trespassing without giving the whistle announcing their presence, she’d flay them for inconvenience. Young snots. Didn’t have any appreciation for what it was to be alone. How could they, the Foxworths bred like rats.
            When she reached the crest of the hill, she saw the figure. Draco, no mistake about that from the uniform and the flash of sunlight off the heavy rifle, but through two hundred yards of rhododendron and scrub under the yellow varsh trees, it was hard to tell if it was a man or a woman. Not that it mattered. She scanned, searching for the rest of the plague.
            What she did see was the flash of sunlight again. A flash of black movement through the brush. The Draco’s rifle swinging round at Ry. Without thinking, she stood and screamed, “Ry, drop!”
            The rifle flared. The dog dropped motionless. Peregrine swung her own rifle up and pointed it at the Draco.
            “Oh Jesus God, I’m sorry,” the Draco called, and of all things, dropped his rifle.
            Peregrine kept hers firm against her shoulder. “Stay where you are,” she yelled when the Draco took a step toward Ry.
            “I didn’t know it was a dog,” the man babbled. “I thought it was a langer.”
            She wondered how he could tell it was a dog from the motionless black lying so frighteningly still in the bushes. She saw the smoke.
            “Smoldering piles!” she bit off the curse to run zig-zags down the hill. There was a puff of wind and the smoke burst into orange flame. The Draco’s laser fire had ignited the dry leaves not five feet away from where Ry lay. The soil was moist underneath, but the leaves on top were dry and the varsh trees could go up easily this time of year.
            “Ry, release.” Peregrine had her eyes on the fire, not on the Draco. Just as she reached the fire and began to grind the burning leaves into the damp humus, her peripherial vision caught Ry leaping. She looked up. The Draco had broken position and was running toward her, rifle in hand again.
            He paused. Swung the rifle back to firing position. Followed the arch of Ry’s leaping body with the rifle.
            And never fired.
            Ry landed his forepaws square on the man’s chest, knocking him flat. Ry snarled, menacingly quiet. He refused to be distracted by the man’s arm and kept his teeth inches from the man’s face.
            Peregrine had to swallow hard before she could speak. “Drop the weapon,” she ordered, her voice not betraying the panic she’d felt.
            To his credit, the man didn’t struggle or yell, but he didn’t release the rifle either. “Ma’am, could you please call the dog off?”
            “Not until you drop the weapon.”
            He released the rifle and asked, “Should I move my hands away from it?”
            “I wouldn’t move much at all if I were you, boyo,” Peregrine said lightly, kicking the rifle away from his hand. She crouched beside him, getting a good look at his face. He might have been in the Draco squad that had quit her place just six days ago, but he might not. He was young, mid 20s, she’d guess. Dark hair, starting to get that shabby, in the field look. And at least three days’ worth of beard when Draco regulations called for a shave, in the field or not. His nose had never been broken, he wasn’t much of a brawler then. Or else he was very good. He was fairly smart about dogs, too, because he watched Ry without challenging the dog with direct eye contact. He looked wary, but not panicked.
            “What do you want Draco?”
            “To breathe?” he wheezed.
            She took a step back. “Ry, back off. Guard close.” The dog backed up to her side, never taking his eyes off his opponent.
            The Draco took a deep, gulping breath. “Scat! What’s he weigh, 200 kilos?”
            Peregrine declined to answer.
            “Permission to stand, ma’am?”
            “Don’t make any sudden moves. And don’t even think about reaching for your weapon.”
            He moved slowly, but easily, twitching his uniform into place in what Peregrine figured was an unconscious motion. She had been around enough Dracos to stop being surprised at how tall they were, but this one wasn’t much taller than she was, about average for a man of Path.
            “You’re not from Alpha or Beta, are you?”
            “No ma’am. You know I could have shot both you and the dog while you were distracted.”
            Peregrine didn’t answer, just stood easy with her rifle loose, but ready in her hands.
            “I’m just saying, if I wanted to harm you, I could have. And I could have shot the dog before he reached me, instead of letting him just tackle me.”
            “Yes, that is the one defining characteristic of Dracos that we all talk about -- how restrained you all are.”
            “I’m not, I don’t,” he stammered then paused. “I don’t expect you’ll believe it, but I’m not like other Dracos.”
            Peregrine wasn’t going to waste time discussing the relative merits of Dracos. “Where’s the rest of your plague?”
            “My what?”
            “A murder of crows, a mob of langers, a plague of dragons. Your patrol, squad, whatever the hell you call the rest of your plague. Where are they?”
            “Oh. I don’t know. I’m a little lost,” he added sheepishly.
            She was skeptical on general principle. Never distill past the spring equinox. Never poke a langer. Never trust a Draco. Lost, my fat uncle’s ass.
            “Ry, perimeter.” With a wave of her hand, she sent the big black dog out to verify the Draco’s statement. The Draco shifted his weight and was about to say something. She cut him off by asking, “Where’s your GPS?”
            “Only officers have those. And they don’t work most of the time anyway. Captains all say the GPS will be functional soon, that the Omegans can’t have put that many satellite hunters in space. But the non-coms all say the effing GPS is a piece of crap. Pardon Ma’am.”
            Peregrine shook her head. He apologized about a couple of swear words, but he’d say ‘Omegans’ and not even know how offensive it was. She watched him closely, shifting her gaze for only a second to check Ry’s progress before shifting back to glare at the Draco again. Ry’s tail was arched over his back and waving slowly. Peregrine cradled the rifle and scanned the trees herself. “When was the last time you saw your plague?”
            “Yesterday.”
            Peregrine relaxed just a little. The rest could be miles away, even back at the PC. Assuming this one was telling the truth. Ry seemed to confirm that he was. She jerked her head in the direction he’d come from. “You’re on my holding. Get off.”
            “Your holding? Oh you mean you have a contract.”
            Peregrine’s eyes narrowed. “You haven’t been on Path long, have you boyo? This is my family’s holding. It’s been our holding for seven generations. A damned Draco contract doesn’t mean jack shit to me. This land is my responsibility.”
            Peregrine stepped closer. “The only thing your damned contract means is that military personnel aren’t supposed to be here without written orders approved by an IPC judge to investigate matters that may be of legitimate military concern. You’re military,” she said and jabbed the butt of her rifle hard in his ribs. The young Draco kept his hands spread away from his body and took a step backwards. “Without approved orders,” she jabbed again. “So you can get the hell,” Jab. “Off my holding,” Jab. “Now.” Jab.
            “The thing is, ma’am, not only am I lost,” he took a deep breath. “I’m a deserter. I’m looking for sanctuary.” Peregrine’s eyes popped wide and she snorted in disbelief. But the Draco kept talking fast.
             “I overheard the officers talking. Last year all the squads helped out at two or three holdings. But this year, each squad is doing only one and then patrolling for deserters and information about the underground that helps enlisteds like me.”
            Peregrine lowered the rifle and laughed out loud. “How stupid do you think we are? That we’d risk our lives helping Dracos? Invest time and energy developing some kind of underground for you? And assuming we’d take that risk and make that investment, we’d just show any old Draco wandering in the woods how it all works?”
            “I know you have to be careful, ma’am.” He spread his hands, palms up, appealing. “Maybe there isn’t any underground at all, maybe that’s just talk. But there’s plenty like me, who’d be happy to go away and leave you in peace if you’d help us.”
            Peregrine leaned forward, resting her hands on the rifle barrel. “Did you ever hear the story of the woman who found a snake freezing on the road? She felt sorry for it, so she picked it up and brought it home. She made a box for it by the fire to warm it up. The snake got warm, slithered out of the box and bit the woman. As she lay there dying, she said to the snake ‘How could you bite me? I saved your life.’ And the snake said ‘You knew I was a snake when you brought me home.’

           “A dragon is just a snake that has eaten too many fools,” Peregrine observed. “You really expect me to invite you in to sit by the fire, little snake?” In a flash, Peregrine swung the rifle up and pointed it at the Draco’s belly.
            He was enough of a boy to let the dismay show on his face, but also enough of a man to stand still. “You could be arrested for pointing a weapon at me,” he said quietly.
            She snorted. What this boyo didn’t know was that Dracos wanted the Bird Holding distillery running and that the only one left to do that was Peregrine. “Hell boyo, I could shoot you and leave your body for the langers to dispose of. Or I could tie you to a tree and let the langers do my killing for me.”
            He didn’t respond. Peregrine pulled the rifle to her shoulder, watching him carefully. He returned her gaze without challenging or flinching.
            She lowered the rifle. “Go on back to your unit and tell them you got lost in the woods.”
            “You’d just let me walk away, wander around lost?”
            “Your being lost is not my concern.”
            “It is if a patrol comes looking for me and I tell them I heard you’re part of the underground.” He sounded more desperate than threatening, and Peregrine refrained from laughing.
            “I’ve got nothing to hide from Draco patrols.”
            He barked out a challenging “Ha. Then why did you come charging over that hill? You could’ve just kept hidden.”
            “I wasn’t hiding. I’m dispersing langers.”
            “Alone?” He was still challenging. Desperate and young was often a fatal combination, and Peregrine was going to make sure that any casualties were on the Draco side. So she waved him further away from his rifle lying on the ground.
            “What makes you think I’m alone, boyo? Or that I can’t handle a mob of langers or a plague of Dracos if I have to? This is my holding.” She moved the balls of both feet, grounding herself. “I’m in the place Path wants me to be. I’m of the Path and on the Path. I go where the Path directs me and do what Path wants me to do.” She sidestepped and bent down to retrieve his rifle with her left hand, never taking her eyes off him.
            “I could help. I could help you hunt langers.”
            “Idiot. You don’t hunt langers; langers hunt you. And I’m not about to show you how I encourage langers to break into smaller mobs and spread into other woods.”
            She stood up and tossed his rifle in front of him. “What you are going to do, when I tell you to, is this. You’re going to pick up your rifle with your left hand and carry it with your arm held straight away from your body. You’re going to walk down this hill until you find a run.”
            “A what?”
            “A run. A baby river. You probably call it a stream or something. You’re going to follow that run until it comes to a creek, then you’re going to follow the creek until it gets to the Phat River. You’ll turn right and walk upstream until you come to those damned ugly bridges you Dracos built and you’ll be home. You’re going to do all that slowly and with your rifle held away from your body. In an hour, you can lower your arm and carry your rifle any way you want. If you lower your arm before that or if you turn around and look back, I’ll mistake you for a langer. You understand.”
            “I understand.” He faced her without flinching.
            She whistled a recall signal to the dog. Ry ran up the slope to her, pink tongue hanging joyfully out the left side of his black mouth, then circled round to stand at her side. She nodded to the Draco.
            “Pick it up. Slowly,” she cautioned. She and Ry followed the Draco down the slope, making enough noise to let the Draco know she was still behind him. She let him find the run without comment. After he’d kneeled down to drink through the filter straw every Draco carried, he picked up his rifle again, careful to move slowly. He jumped to the other side of the run where it was easier to walk and followed it down the slope. He carried the rifle away from his body as she’d ordered, but his arm began to sag, and after a quarter hour or so had passed, he lifted the rifle high above his head and switched arms. He had to keep switching arms, but Peregrine didn’t comment.
            As the hour passed and they got closer to Tesia Creek, the big stream that would feed into the Phat River, she smelled smoke. When they got to the Tesia, the Draco paused, set the rifle down and started to turn around. Peregrine fired three shots into the gravel at his feet.
            “I’m still here. Turn around again and I’ll aim higher, boyo.”
            His back straightened. “We need to talk,” he said, turning toward her.
            “I don’t need to talk. Turn around and get your feet wet.”
            He faced her. “My unit might be close. They were getting ready to burn a holding when I left.” He jerked his head downstream. “There’s the smoke.”
            “And?” she asked. The Draco was pointing in the direction of what used to be Cowlie’s Center, a small house and a medium sized store that saved everyone in the area a trip all the way down to Phat Water, back when it was thriving river town, back before the Dracos killed it to build their damned PC. The Cowlies had been moved to some other region eight years ago, and so it wasn’t any big loss if Dracos burned the abandoned buildings to discourage squatters.
            “And I don’t think you should come much further. Things,” he cleared his throat. “Things got kinda ugly before I left and it’s probably best you’re not stopped now.”
            Peregrine did laugh at that. “It’s never a good time to run into Dracos or langers in the woods. But I’ll manage, thanks.”
            “Can you, maybe, help me? I know you said you’re not with the underground, but I was wondering if you might know where I might find a fix. We were dosed for the day, supposed to be back by now or get another hit from our NCO, and I’m starting to feel it a bit.” He spread his hands in appeal. Peregrine noticed the flutter in his fingers and tension in his face.
            She shook her head. Effing Dracos didn’t even trust each other. She’d heard about this from Ma Tesia, how so many soldiers were deserting that the officers were injecting them with some synthetic drug. Addiction, the incentive to return.
            “Can’t help you there,” she said truthfully. “And I don’t know of anyone else who can either, even if they were inclined to.” That was a lie. She did know that Kara Foxworth could get in touch with the Resistance, supposedly in a few days, although Peregrine suspected Kara was bit more connected than she let on.
            He shrugged philosophically. “You’ll probably be inclined to help me with this though. Before you go, I need you to hit me. Hard enough to knock me out, so I have an excuse for being missing all day.”
            Peregrine nodded and walked closer, Ry at her side. The Draco had the audacity to hold his hand out to Ry. The dog ignored him, turning his black brindled face away.
             “Well, turn around boyo. Unless you’re planning to say someone sneaked up in front of you.”
            He turned. Peregrine saw his shoulders edge towards his ears. She put her right hand on his shoulder. “That’s no good,” she said with pseudo concern. “You’re all tight. I can’t hit you when you all tensed up. Tell me about your girl back home.” His shoulders jerked tighter. “Oh she’s the reason you left, huh. Well then tell me about,” she paused as if thinking, while her left hand worked the billy out of her back pocket. She’d never need it for Baily, but she always carried because she never knew when Burly Boy would need a bit of encouragement. “Tell me about,” she said, raising the eight inch, leather covered club high, “the food you miss most from home.”  Her voice never strayed from the false sweetness as she swiftly kneed him in the kidney and smacked the billy hard against his skull.
            The Draco fell like a pole-axed mule at her feet, sprawling into the creek.
            “Ah shit,” she said, tucking the billy away. He’d fallen face first into the water and she’d have to turn him over to keep him from drowning. Just for a moment, she considered letting him drown, taking the knowledge of where her berry patch lay with him, but it was just a trifle too cold blooded. To keep any trace of his blood off her gloves, she tucked them into her belt.
            The scent of Essence berries filled her nostrils again and without thinking, she breathed deep as she rolled the Draco onto his back. With the intoxicating smell fresh in her brain, she crouched beside him, just to check his pulse and make sure he was still alive. The skin beneath his jaw was warm. She traced a finger upwards, delighting in the prickle of his beard, then stroked his cheekbone with one finger, her lips half parted. Up close, he really was quite good looking.
            Ry took the opportunity to push his way between her and the fallen Draco and plant a sloppy kiss on her face.
            “I don’t know what’s worse, Ry,” she said with a sigh. “That at times I can lie like a Draco or that at times I could lie with a Draco.”
            Ry’s only response was to butt his massive head beneath her chin, his round, prick ears tickling her cheeks. She buried her face in his fur for a moment, then grabbed his ruff with both hands and shook his face from side to side. He panted, smiling at the attention.
            “What are you going to do with me, huh Ry? You don’t care, do you. It’s the Essence scent. They say picking berries is a job for young lovers.”
            It wasn’t all they said. Peregrine knew that her neighbors talked about her running the distillery alone with a sad shake of the head and no small amount of tongue clucking. Conventional wisdom was that running a distillery was a family business, and those who didn’t have family had no business doing it. When they asked her why she didn’t send for her daughter at least, she said it was because the Dracos didn’t know who her daughter was and Peregrine didn’t want to risk her daughter being used to insure her cooperation. Lying to Dracos never gave her a second thought, but that lie to her neighbors made her cringe inside. Well she didn’t really need help yet. And when this fall’s runs were ready to be cured, she’d need a partner, not a daughter. She’d find one somewhere. She hoped Ma Tesia could find someone in their connections. Peregrine couldn’t think of much worse than inviting some half-wit relative of the Foxworths onto her holding.
            She leaned forward to check the Draco’s breathing and decided he’d wake up with a hellish headache, but there was no need to worry that he won’t wake up at all. Ry licked her face again.
            Well, that’s about what I deserve, she thought, wiping dog drool off her face with the back of her hand. Then realized what a mistake that was when the scent assaulted her senses again. She stood up, pulled the gloves back on.
            “Let’s go Ry, before I forget who he is and where we are.”
            The big dog followed her back up the slope, back to where she’d left Baily. She still had most of the afternoon to finish picking berries. With only Baily and Ry for company, she’d find her way home as the sky went pink and purple and the shadows in the woods grew deep and cold. She’d wash the biting smell of Essence off her hands and try to ignore the lingering scent that left her tossing alone in her sheets.

 

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